00:00
00:00
skyspin

3 Audio Reviews

2 w/ Responses

Gallant steeds?

I love this song, but the description was a little over the top. and fitting. and funny. nicely done!
(I'm sorry, i just can't take this seriously watching little badgers dancing in the background :P)

OrphenFire responds:

Lol thanks. The story is not my own. It's a science fiction book that is going to be published. I've read the first draft and it's a brilliant novel. This is one song from the concept album about the entire story (OAW) that will be released along with the book when it's published.

hm...

I like the song overall, but i think the complete stops at :38 and 1:11 drag the entire piece down. in truth, the third section would have been fine on it's own.
once i stop my brain from getting confused over that, it comes off as a pretty darn good song.

"A random note"

just a random note, i know it's heavy metal, but in general even heavy metal songs can use some dynamic contrast. just a thought :P

faisalm1991 responds:

thanks for the feedback, but can you explain what you mean by dynamic contrast?

Yoshi Endo @skyspin

Male

Fairview HS

Colorado

Joined on 8/27/11

Level:
5
Exp Points:
265 / 280
Exp Rank:
> 100,000
Vote Power:
4.47 votes
Rank:
Civilian
Global Rank:
> 100,000
Blams:
0
Saves:
33
B/P Bonus:
0%
Whistle:
Normal
Medals:
40